Legislative drafting: its nature, its history in England and India, and the diseases of language

Judicial and Legislative Process · Unit V · Topic 18 of 20 · 6 min read

What kind of activity legislative drafting is; the diseases of legal language (ambiguity, vagueness, generality, redundancy, legalese and the rest) and their cures; and the history of drafting from Coode and Thring in England to Macaulay's Law Commission and the Legislative Department in India.

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1. The nature of legislative drafting
2. The diseases of language and their cures
3. History of drafting in England
4. History of drafting in India
How this is examined

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The examinable core. Unit V opens with the nature of drafting, the “diseases of language” the drafter must guard against, and the history of drafting in India and England. The stages of drafting, the parts of a Bill and the main devices are in the earlier drafting note; this note supplies the theory and the history.

1. The nature of legislative drafting

Legislative drafting is the expression of a legislative policy in a text that will have legal effect. It is at once a legal task (the text must fit the Constitution and the existing law), a linguistic task (it must say one thing and only that thing) and a practical one (it must work for the officials and citizens who apply it). Bentham called the art of composing laws “nomography” and thought it as important as deciding their content.

Its distinctive features:

Several audiences. Legislators who pass the text, officials who apply it, citizens who must obey it, and judges who will read it in a dispute, often decades later.
A hostile reader. Stephen J. said in In re Castioni (1891) that it is not enough to attain a degree of precision that a person reading in good faith can understand; the drafter must, if possible, attain a degree of precision that a person reading in bad faith cannot misunderstand.
Permanence and generality. The text speaks to future, unknown cases. The drafter must imagine them.
Constraint. The drafter does not choose the policy and works within the conventions of the statute book, the General Clauses Act and the canons of interpretation.
The drafter’s dilemma. Precision tends to length and complexity; simplicity tends to generality and uncertainty. Every choice of words trades one against the other.

Reed Dickerson (The Fundamentals of Legal Drafting) treated drafting as applied analysis: most bad drafting is bad thinking, and the drafter’s first job is to clarify the policy and its structure before writing a word.

2. The diseases of language and their cures

Disease	What it is	Cure
Ambiguity	A word or construction with two or more distinct meanings. Semantic (“month”: calendar or lunar?), syntactic (does “in a public place” qualify both verbs?), and the notorious “and”/“or”.	Definitions; paragraphing so each condition stands alone; stating whether conditions are cumulative or alternative.
Vagueness	A term with a clear core and an uncertain fringe (“night”, “reasonable”, “substantial”).	Fix a measure where certainty matters (times, distances, amounts); keep vague standards only where flexibility is intended.
Over-generality	Words wider than the policy, catching conduct that was not meant.	Test the draft against examples at the edges; add exceptions or narrow the words.
Redundancy and doublets	“Null and void”, “each and every”, “fit and proper”.	One word; redundancy invites a court to give the extra word a meaning.
Elegant variation	Using different words for the same thing.	Same word, same meaning; different word, different meaning.
Legalese and archaism	“Hereinafter”, “the said”, “aforesaid”.	Plain modern words.
Long, compressed sentences	Many conditions and exceptions in one sentence.	Break into sub-sections and clauses; one idea per sentence.
Hidden actor	Passive voice that does not say who must act (“notice shall be given”).	Name the person who has the duty or power.
Negatives and provisos piled up	Double negatives, provisos to provisos.	State the rule positively; move exceptions into their own sub-section.
Excessive cross-reference	“Subject to section 4, save as provided in section 9...”	Restructure; use cross-references only where they are needed.

Dickerson drew the key distinction between ambiguity and vagueness. Ambiguity is almost always a fault, because the reader cannot tell which of two meanings was meant. Vagueness may be a deliberate choice, because a standard such as “reasonable” lets the law adapt to cases that cannot be foreseen. The fault is unintended vagueness, especially in penal laws, where it raises a constitutional problem (see the next note).

3. History of drafting in England

Early statutes were drafted by judges and officials, and later by private counsel retained by government departments, without any common style.
George Coode, in On Legislative Expression (1840s), analysed the legislative sentence into the case, the condition, the legal subject and the legal action. His analysis still underlies the structure of a well-drafted section.
Henry Thring became the first head of the Office of the Parliamentary Counsel, set up in 1869 to draft all government Bills centrally. His Practical Legislation (1877) laid down rules of arrangement and style.
Interpretation Acts (1850, 1889, now 1978) supplied standard definitions and rules, shortening statutes.
The Renton Committee (1975) criticised over-compression and excessive detail. Sir William Dale’s Legislative Drafting: A New Approach (1977) compared English drafting unfavourably with continental styles that state principles more simply.
Plain language and “good law”. From the 2000s the Office of the Parliamentary Counsel adopted gender-neutral drafting and a programme to reduce the complexity of statutes, under the “Good Law” initiative launched in 2013.

4. History of drafting in India

The Charter Act of 1833 created a legislative member of the Governor-General’s Council (Macaulay was the first) and led to the First Law Commission (1834).
The colonial codes. Macaulay’s draft Penal Code, enacted in 1860, set an Indian drafting style: short sections, definitions, explanations and, above all, illustrations. The Codes of Civil and Criminal Procedure, the Contract Act and the Evidence Act (drafted by James Fitzjames Stephen) followed.
The Legislative Department of the Government of India drafted central legislation in the colonial period; after independence it became the Legislative Department of the Ministry of Law and Justice, which drafts all Central Bills, Ordinances and regulations and vets subordinate legislation. States have their own law departments.
Language. Article 348 requires the authoritative text of Acts to be in English until Parliament provides otherwise. The Official Languages Act, 1963 and the Authoritative Texts (Central Laws) Act, 1973 provide for authoritative Hindi texts, prepared through the Official Languages Wing of the Legislative Department. Bilingual drafting adds its own source of ambiguity, since the two texts may diverge.
Recent practice. The Pre-Legislative Consultation Policy (2014) requires draft Bills to be published for comment; the BNS, BNSS and BSA (2023) kept the structure and illustrations of the colonial codes while renumbering and amending them.

Comparison in one line. England centralised drafting in a specialist office from 1869 and moved slowly towards plain language; India inherited a codifying tradition that already valued definitions and illustrations, but drafts in English for a largely non-English-speaking population, which makes clarity and translation the central problems.

How this is examined

Expect “Nature of legislative drafting”, “Diseases of language a drafter must avoid”, or “History of legislative drafting in India and England”, as an essay or short note. For the diseases, the table above with two Indian examples is the answer; for the history, give the English line (Coode, Thring, Renton, Good Law) and the Indian line (1833, Macaulay, Stephen, the Legislative Department, the language provisions) and end with a comparison.

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